The Price of Loyalty: Serving Adela of Blois
by Malve Von Hassell
Historium Press


"You think you owe him because of what you feel for his wife and because he has been kind to you. But you don't owe him anything, not anymore."

In this historical novel, when young Cerdic's calming of a horse unexpectedly saves William the Conqueror's life, he offers Cerdic an apprenticeship. Cerdic grows up like a sibling to William's daughter Adela and her brothers. Cerdic follows Adela as she becomes countess at Blois, while her brothers bicker amongst themselves. Adela also arranges a marriage for Cerdic to the daughter of a vineyard owner. Will Cerdic ever love his wife, Giselle, as much as he loves Adela and the count?

Although much of the story is imagined, most chapters begin with historical excerpts that have a domestic or speculative character, setting an unpretentious tone. Cerdic's character development through his relationships trumps the well-known, course-changing events of history in this account. The book thrives on an undercurrent of suspense. The prose's focus on subtle responses and gestures appeals with emotional empathy. Cerdic's innocence (unknowingly saving William), knowledge (surpassing William's sons in tutoring), and conscientiousness (fulfilling orders at Blois despite Giselle's disapproval) endear readers to his underdog plight, prompting a call for justice and contentment on his behalf.

Bleakness is one way the book is historically accurate. The effect of its sweeping coverage of generations mirrors the characters' lifestyle of endurance and patience. For Cerdic and Giselle, at the mercy of weather and of benefactors, poverty is always a possibility. Conversations are bright spots, both highlighting present moments and expressing love, driving the book forward. The final climax, coinciding with the crusades, turns the tide for entire populations as well as the protagonists. Cerdic stops wondering; he knows to whom he is loyal by whom he sees demonstrates their love for him in a surprise episode on the battlefield. The book's message of faithfulness inspires and gladdens.

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